Recent Movie Reviews

Sublo & Tangy Mustard #5 - Opposites Sublo & Tangy Mustard #5 - Opposites

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Awesome work as always Aaron!! I gotta draw some fanart sometime I love this series.

The Forgotten Video The Forgotten Video

Rated 5 / 5 stars

That managed to tug on my heart strings AND make me laugh. Very well done sir.

Sonic the Hedgehog: A Dark Secret Sonic the Hedgehog: A Dark Secret

Rated 4 / 5 stars

The animation and backgrounds were all really great. I really liked the visuals and sound effects you threw in, they really tied the whole cartoon together. Tails running up to sonic was seriously the funniest shit. The voice acting was decent too.
I will say though I don't think the memey stuff wasn't good for this (WHAT ARE THOOOOSE, sanic, rustling jimmies). I thought it really took away from the quality of the whole animation. Seriously, "what are those" joke came out of nowhere and I feel like you could've done more with the Shadow bit. Plus, canned sound effects (such as that door opening sound effect at 1:24) should be avoided. I know it's tempting to use existing stuff like that, but you might want to look deeper for sound effects which are less well known already. It can ruin the immersion viewers have to hear stuff like that.
As for the ending, i think it would've been a lot better if you just cut it after tails said "too slow" to end with more of a shock value, rather than do the whole seinfeld thing, which I'm pretty sure everybody watching has seen parodies of already.
All in all, I liked this cartoon and hope to see more from you. You draw very well, and I like your style. Keep it up.

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Narmak responds:

Thank you for such detailed feedback! To be honest, this animation was originally supposed to be a quick 1 minute thing for fun, but I always get way too into animating and then its becomes 4 minutes long :\
But yes, this was the only animation of mine that I did not storyboard before I created it, I kinda just went along with whatever. Also, is the door sound effect well known? I found it online and didn't recognize it as a common sound effect.

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Mr. Dink's Grill Mr. Dink's Grill

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Really enjoyed this collab! One of you goons need to tip me off for next time!

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NG's 20th Anniversary Collab NG's 20th Anniversary Collab

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Beautiful, makes me wish I discovered newgrounds way earlier.

Picollage 2015 Picollage 2015

Rated 5 / 5 stars

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Forget Forget

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I really like this one. Super dark and melancholy. You should totally include it in your new cartoon.

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Mickey Man Mickey Man

Rated 5 / 5 stars

This is why I come to Newgrounds.

OrganizedApeShape responds:

thanks babe!

Ginger - Hi-De-Ho! Ginger - Hi-De-Ho!

Rated 5 / 5 stars

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AfroNinja360 responds:

thank ya!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Awesome work Bryan!

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